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The concoction, unbridled deep
Within my dream I solidify
Stricken with terror;
Petrified with cold feet
Not manifested internally
To the brain it does not weep
Concealing my nervousness
When few dribbles conspire
Negativity that I abhor
Remains close as my ego
Beheading; One choice,
A familiar or foe?
Stalling time bewitched me
My heartbeats uncanny
Vulnerable the emotions
That fiddled steadily
The lids of my eyes, heavy
As the hours decayed away
My dreams unnoticed,
To the Hellions that chased through eternity
- by Mecca Against Reality |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/01/2008 |
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- Title: Heedless Burdens
- Artist: Mecca Against Reality
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Description:
Please comment, and do so honestly!
Thank you,
--Mecca
- Date: 11/01/2008
- Tags: heedless burdens
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Comments (7 Comments)
- fatmasterson - 12/11/2008
- What.......what the heck was that? I'm gonna go ahead and give you a 1/5 but please take this as a 0 out of a billion. : )
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- hey girl hey XD - 12/09/2008
- ok..wow..again. I see what you mean about rhythm.
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- This Accident - 11/10/2008
- Ohh. Such darkness! I love it!
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- gokushin540 - 11/03/2008
- Okay, pretty good.
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- iBrightScales - 11/02/2008
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I think this one is my favorite.
Abhor, that's one of my favorite words!
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- the_ashen_child - 11/02/2008
- ................*is in awe*.........O.o
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- earth eats sun - 11/01/2008
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wow! i like this A LOT! i love the rhymes and the words, just all FIT IN! 5/5 keep up the work!
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