Angle from Heaven.

• Artist: verisia213
• Description: This is short and sad, and I will probably get made fun of for it, but I don't care! Please read this with an open mind that you would hope anyone would read your writing with. Thanks, and if anyone has a suggestion for a poem I would gladly take it. Also if there are any suggestions on how to make this poem better, I would be more than happy to take those as well.
• Date: 11/03/2008
• Tags: angle from heaven eyes happy

I saw you standing there,
over everyone else.
Looking like an angel from heaven
that came to save me from my fears.

I wanted you the second our
eyes met, but I know it will never be.
You were to perfect to be my angle.

I'm happy for you that you've
found the one for you, and can
only hope that I will find the one
who will care and love me.
Someone to be my angle from heaven.
heart

Comments

[verisia213]

Thanks for everyone who commented. LUV U ALL! and yes, I spelled angel wrong...I couldn't remember how to spell it...so I looked it up, after i submited. THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS!!! smile I really am truely grateful to all of you! smile heart

[Soulless Marionette]

this is very sad but very good

[sion-de-aries]

i totally got the meaning of the poem,
very good 5/5 for me so keep it up
and if this really happened, i just want to say angels never leave those
who they guard.

[slug1111]

i seen a typo, but i knew what it ment, and srry, but not verry poetic...i get the meanig but it doesnt flow...

[Lionhearted Sam]

You really add subtle meaning to the whole "story" that was this passage. If this has happened to you in real life, enjoy it. Anyways, I hope you read and enjoy my Poems as I add them.

[love_me_im_awesome]

I like that

[BannedAccount00300028096]

its really good!!!! is it angle or angel? typo sry but i give it a 5/5