Reflection

• Artist: ladybabs
• Description: It's about me seeing myself as a pretty, nice girl who may not be perfect, but that's what makes her pretty. I like who I really am , but I'm afraid to show the real me (= the reflection).
  I hope you like my poem :)
• Date: 11/04/2008
• Tags: reflection perfection perfect fears imperfect

I look at her,
She is right in front of me,
She is,
No perfection,
Just,
A reflection,
She’s so afraid,
Full of fears,
And her eyes,
Are filled with tears,
I look at her,
She is right in front of me,
She is,
My perfection,
My reflection,
She looks so pretty,
She looks so bright,
She is me,
But I can’t show her right.

Comments

[Jakeypake]

good one

[QueenxofxSekyd]

I most definately liked it smile Most people, when they make their poems rhyme, they try too hard and it proves distracting. Your rhyming flowed really well, though. I'm impressed smile