Vengeance of the Fallen

• Artist: arney lol
• Description: this is a completely original work and i'm still working on how this would be set to music. i don't like to tell the message because i like open thoughts
• Date: 11/09/2008
• Tags: vengeance fallen song lyrics original

Soldiers busting into walls
Never knowing when darkness falls
Listen closely to the calls
To the cries of the fallen

Shattered minds, Shattered dreams
scattered memories, vanishing gleams
Pride is broken, dreams ripping by the seams
No use for the fallen

[Chorus]
Let them live
Let them give
Give their lives and melodies
Fulfill the vengeance of the fallen

Laughing stocks
that others mock
Depressions living in this rock
Bring us back the fallen

Open minds, Open souls
Hearts of crystal turned to coal
People yelling "No more, no more"
There goes the vengeance of the fallen

[Chorus]

[Guitar Solo]

No more vengeace to the fallen

Comments

[wilder17]

i like it but if i were you i wouldn't put "fallen" at the end of eash stanza. i play mostly Rise Against-ish punk music and i tried singing it like that but ending each stanza with fallen throughs it off. still though for great lyrics i give a 4

[brittneyybabyy]

ohmagosh
i like it!
5/5!
its sorta emo-ish
but like, to me it portrays a different vision.
like...
those who worked hard in this world
and attemted to earn respect for our country
and have fallen in the process
are angry, because many of us still do not realize what they have been through
so they get revenge
i like it.

[Twisted____Torture]

I think it is very expertly written and i honestly can't find any flaws. I enjoyed reading this because i feel like there is a whole mix of emotions and it makes me think about what the message is. Great job i give it a 5.