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Can you see the pain you cause?
The misery and sorrow in my eyes?
Of course you don`t, you don`t care but now I see you every where.
I hate you because you always say goodbye.
When I want you to say hi.
But I love you and i just don`t know why.
I feel so numb.
You never did come.
I need help but I don`t know what to do.
Who do i turn to?
I feel my heart racing, my blood run cold.
It`s like you put me on a never ending hold.
I need to be free.
But my heart has a lock on it.
And i can`t find the key.
You used to have a grasp on my heart.
But now I`m free.
Just like i used to be.
The lies and hatred between us has vanished.
But from my heart you shall always be banished.
Goodbye, I actually said for the first time in my life.
Then in my heart there was a sticking strait up knife.
I died a sad and lonely death.
Because i said goodbye and left
- by blue_fire_ruby |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: my heart
- Artist: blue_fire_ruby
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Description:
well this happened right after i found out my bf was cheating on me.....
my name is Megan Cheyenne Blankenship i entered this piece on poetry.com and many others.........
but about the poem......i hope u like it and if u like it i could write more just send a pm k
have fun - Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: megan bluefireruby heart
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Comments (6 Comments)
- UNKNOW dude ii - 12/14/2008
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I liked it alot =)
the rhythm cood have been a bit better
but expression isn't about rhyming so ima give u a 5 =D - Report As Spam
- Doomed Sex - 12/01/2008
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it was good, i liked the ring in it.. especially the vanished and banished rhyme.
that caught me.. but idk, i didn't really feel a good vibe and rhythm when i was reading it but just a little revision and it'll be great..
3/5 - Report As Spam
- v_Aika_v - 11/30/2008
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x3
it's so nice...
happened the same thing to me....
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Bitter the Clown - 11/28/2008
- Awww so tutching.
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