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we had the best of times
laughing talking making fun of mimes.
weve been through good times and bad
some were horrible some were rad.
"rad you said it every day
i hope you will remeber uncle j.
that i use to call with pride
man i wish you never died.
"hay s**t happens"as you use to say
all you did was play all day.
i cried,you were missed it was a hit in the gut
like salt being poured on a great open cut.
i told myself what you use to say
i miss my laughing uncle J
- by King-Stanson |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Aryeec - 06/02/2009
- I'm glad you decided to post this. It gives me a sense of love that I know can only be felt between a guy and his favorite uncle. As for the technicalities go, it's very well put together. Meaningful and original.
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- Joreph - 11/28/2008
- Very touching, sometimes ppl think they need to use big words and hard lyrical scheme but simplicity is beautiful. 3/5
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- RisingMoonAngel - 11/27/2008
- awwww thats sweet and adorable! 4/5
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- King-Stanson - 11/25/2008
- please comment
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