A Poem

• Artist: parkerAlice
• Description: Just a poem I wrote when I was feeling kinda down and under the weather.
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: just random poem

When I'm walkin' down the street;
I'm listenin' to the beat;
I hear ya walkin' by;
I say goodbye;
'Cause you're not with me anymore;
I remembered what we were before;
I close the door.

Comments

[jenuinely]

uhh its should be longer and the ending ishnt a gewd ending
. - .

[X3SasoDeiX3]

HI ETHAN
;D
okk
i rated this a 5 c:

[MezzoForte]

I...can't even give constructive criticism, you shouldn't write. Anymore, I'm sorry. 1/5

[tksunshine93]

Wow...quite short but still very beautiful and meaningful. Good job.

[Runescape v2]

damn tats good stuff o-e

[SnoozleBear]

very lovely ethan! biggrin ^^ i like it a lot biggrin

[x_iKimmiFreakiee]

cool poem