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Walking in the desert of my own despair and inner strife,
leaving my pain and guilt behind,
forgetting the taste of water and the feel of society,
but always feeling the heat of my hatred and the bitter taste of betrayel
As i fall and lay ignoring the scourching sand,
remembering the people i always trusted,
i accepted the fate to become a memory as well
Taking one last glimpse around me,
i see a beautiful yet untouchable flower from a far,
my curiousity became my goal and my will,
closer i crawled closer the flower was near,
yet not a flower but a girl sitting in pain as well
She tended my wounds and gave me the taste of life once again,
her touch warm yet sad her voice sweet yet lonely,
she was kind yet afraid of me she healed my pain
But did not let me heal hers......
- Title: MY VERY FIRST POEM lol n_n
- Artist: Mr_FuZaKe
- Description: Apaerently this is how i felt before and after i met a girl BUT I AINT EMO lol and like i said this was my very first poem i still have no title lol oh yeah and some of how i still feel today.
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: very first poem
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Rainbow cat FACE - 10/24/2009
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this is actually pretty good, for being in the spotlight xP
most of those ones epic fail. but i like this one. i like the imagery from the desert =3 - Report As Spam
- IFemale Kakuzu - 07/04/2009
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that was awshume :3 - Report As Spam
- EmoBananasStoleMyHomework - 01/29/2009
- i can really relate! 5/5
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- Sparkplugo - 11/30/2008
- i kinda understood it it was good and all 4/5
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- Hotlillay - 11/29/2008
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3-5
Sorry, but something about it depresses me. - Report As Spam
- FormerlyKitaTataki - 11/29/2008
- Pretty good, 5 out of 5, altho ur title kinda set me off. Oh, and FIRST COMMENT! Best of luck
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