The Magical Feeling

• Artist: iluvCulinary
• Description: ummmm this is something i made last year wen i was half asleep so if it sucks go rite ahead and tell me.
  i also submited this to a poem contest but i lost :(.
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: magical feeling

It's the magical feeling,
Of peace and love,
Of calmness and understanding,
No war, no hate, all love.

It's the magical feeling,
you've accomplished your life long goal,
you fell in llove with the right person for you,
No war, no hate, all love.

It's the magical feeling,
you made a new best friend,
all enemies are your new friends,
No war, no hate, all love.

It's the magical feeling,
getting all A's for the first time,
graduating and going to college,
No war, no hate, all love.

It's a magical feeling,
moving out and getting married,
having your own child,
No war, no hate, all love.

Comments

[skywalker1011]

i lyked it

[Nikki4815]

Yeah, wouldn't that be nice. Too bad my life is full of drama. So much for "No war, no hate, all love" But it's really nice, so I give you a 5/5, and hope your poem becomes true for me one day. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"