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• Artist: i-is-ninja
• Description: this one was one that my friend and i wrote together...
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: untitled

"Friends forever," you promised.
"Together till the end."
We did everything together,
You were my best friend.

When I was sad, you were by my side.
When I was scared, you felt my fear.
You were my best support-
If I needed you, you were there.

You were the greatest friend,
you always knew what to say:
You made everything seem better.
As long as we had each other,
everything would be okay.

But somewhere along the line,
We slowly came apart.
I was here, you were there,
It tore a hole in my heart.

Comments

[possum fool]

its sweet, i like it.
the third paragraph doesn't follow the pattern of the rest of the poem though, it sounds out of place and gets rid of the flow of the poem.
good job though, give it some work.