Do You Love Torment Me?

• Artist: XxChildesh_GamesxX
• Description: dont ask....lol..but comment and rate..thank you
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: torment

You torment me like
I have no feelings

Why do you let people
Say cruel things to me?

They hurt me like
I'm nothing at all

You stand there and
Hear them say these things

And yet you do
Nothing for me

Do you love to torment me?
Why is that so?

Why cant you protect
me from the others?

Just like you used to do
Dont you love me still?

You do nothing for me..
So, now I cant take it anymore

You never believe me
You listen to the others

They say such cruel things
But it doesnt upset you

Why are you like that?
Do you love to torment me?

Comments

[-Cynical Sexy Bear-]

Flow is horrid. Too blocky. Your literacy is making me smile, though. :3

[Mecca Against Reality]

I get where your going with your poems, but I think with a bit more material and flow, you could improve by leaps and bounds.