A Hunters' Hunger

• Artist: Lyris Mendax
• Description: Have you ever felt the temptation to do what you know is wrong?
  
  (If you like it let me know if you hate it let me know why, because feedback for a writer is a step on the road to improvement. )
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: hunters hunger

A Hunters' Hunger

Oh mighty hunter, with eyes of gold.
It is to you that I have sold my soul
With a hash look you take control
and tainted kiss you devour all

I have to wonder
As I look into your eyes so cold
Is your kiss really worth my soul?

Would I do better to move onward
and not be held by your hunters touch

To find one that will not devourer
Just because they live for a moments lust?

I shudder and tremble in the moment
Held by that tainted need.
Your gold eyes they woe and call

You seem to know that I will concede
Soon your tainted lips will I feel
Your hunger will I feed

Till at last you move on
and their is little left of me
All because I have given into your golden eyes
That are filled with an empty need

Comments

[Lady_Lycanthrope1990]

very well written, and likewise i know what you write of. i look forward to reading more of your work smile

[catty_girl_09]

You're probably going to mentally hit me for this **Cowers slightly** but it reminds me of Twilight somewhat. Probably only because I just watched the horrid movie and I'm still ranting about how much I hated it...
But I like it. It's well written and hints at so many unpleasant yet pleasant experiences of life. Forces one to think of a time when temptation took over...
^.^

[Sivalhot]

er... don't know wat to say

[x_Kaleido Ruby_x]

nice!

[Liz-z MCRmy]

I really liked it 5/5