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Everytime I see you, you are smiling
But you never smile at me,
What will it take to make you notice
That with you is where I want to be
I fear that we'll never be together,
'Cause we're always worlds apart,
But no matter where you are,
You'll always be in my heart
I want to be the one to make you smile,
I want to hear the sound of laughter,
And out of all the girls,
Your the only one I'm after,
Everday I see you walking by,
Without a passing glance,
But all I've ever wanted,
Was for you to give me a chance,
It's the same way every day,
I stutter and I mumble,
And in the end,
My courage always crumbles.
Your always in a group,
Laughing with all your friends,
And even though you ignore me,
I'll love you till the end.
- Title: Longing Love
- Artist: Aziin Z
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Description:
Well, i guess i was just feeling a little down..
don't kno why i wrote a love poem tho.... - Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: longing love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Xx-FallenGuardianAngel-xX - 02/28/2009
- AWESOME! I luv it! 5/5
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- Marionette_Mentation - 02/25/2009
- it's classic and romantic. the passion he shows towards this girl is something that everyone feels towards someone they love.
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- iHuginator - 12/08/2008
- aww... thats soo sweet.. i love it... 5/5!!!
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- Nikki4815 - 12/07/2008
- Nice. I love it. 4/5. Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message" and I recently submitted "Lost in the World"
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- eugenie cakezx3 - 12/07/2008
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check out my poem toos. [search by username]
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i like yours. its wnoderful - Report As Spam