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There is a light
That shines in this dark
There is a light
Just a little spark
I keep walking
And it slowly grows
I keep walking
For I have a feeling it knows
This light
Shall lead me
This light
Shall see me
This light
I reach
This light
My beach
This light
Brought me here today
This light
Brought me to this bay
Here I am
I’m not leaving
Here I am
My gate to heaven
- by SmileCute12 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Zack_Blaze1 - 12/22/2008
- Personally i think that's Great. Short and sweet. Good Job ^^
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- DietzyPietzy - 12/22/2008
- O.O kool..............................
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- wiccanmother_zoey - 12/10/2008
- Good visualization dear! nice rythem. its personal and full of emotion. Personally, i think its wrong to critique anothers style of poetry. Its all a matter of how the writer wants to write it. Every writing style means something special to each writer. You did good dear. Keep this up! I'm rooting for you
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- hey girl hey XD - 12/10/2008
- i like it
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- rocksan11 - 12/08/2008
- ummm its great but i think you could take out like one or two this and put the but over all you did a great job no i have no problem takeing a look at anybody elses poems if they want
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- SmileCute12 - 12/07/2008
- um ok ty i guess
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- -Cynical Sexy Bear- - 12/07/2008
- Personally it doesn't strike my fancy. There's to much repition for my fancy...and you didn't repeat evenly and that irriatates me. >.>
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