Love Thats Lost

• Artist: LovingFox
• Description: IDK a poem i wrote i only write when im sad but i can write happy stuff i just do this to let it all out ok read on
  
  My love
  
  Was lost
  
  I lost him by being retarded
  
  I was just close enough to go out with him
  
  And then that day happened
  
  Im not gonna go into huge details
  
  Well im not even gonna tell the story
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: love thats lost

Hes mine

Hes perfect for me says everyone

Hes just the one

I believed them

He was the one just for me

But i could never tell him that i liked him

I had my friends Ask

He said "no"

I was heart broken

But it was me

He wanted to hear it from me

I didnt relize it

And the next year when i did realize it

He was gone

Lauren Madison Williams(:

Comments

[Risoka-Oni]

Well..
When I saw it.. I dont know why.. But I remember a person..
I'm not saying I loved she. But I lost she... She leave, and I dont know she will back. I only want she back to I can talk with she...

Now I'm talking about me...
Damn...

Well, good poem, it's awesome.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Very Weak. You misspelled "her(e)", "re(a)lize" seemingly childish. 1/5.

[jojs_97]

that's a good but sad poem!! i love it!! rock on!! and keep writing!!