The Angel Of Death

• Artist: Lone Wolf Rayne
• Description: i just made the poem at 4:17 am today for my clan leader KAIN im sorry for your loss this is for you!!
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: angel death

The Angel OF Death is Mercyless
Taking away the ones we love with the slightest caress
Over the hill and long far away
Is the begining of a new and wonderful day

Live for the ones you lost
Dont give up not at any cost
Love like you never loved before
Love because death is knocking behind every door

This Fallen Angel knows no bounds
Shadows from hell it now surrounds
Taking you in and letting you drown
He wont give up till your six feet in the ground

Live for the ones that loved you for who you are
Look to the heavens, GOD gave them a new bright burning star
Love for those who are in need
For this is a world of hate and it only knows greed

This is my letter of sympathy
This is my note of agony
This is my memo for another tomorrow
This is my thoughts live on through sorrow.....

Comments

[I Like to Eat Faces]

I think you tried too hard with the rhyming, but overall, its good.

[Demonio69]

Niiiccceee! Dont pay attention to the people who worry about petty things like spelling errors, the poems for a friend who lost someone and thats what matters

[yakumo21]

wow nice^^the first line made me so sad V_V but kool poem^_^

[take my account please]

Who cares about spelling mistakes? This isn't a spelling bee it's a poetry contest.


I like the poem. It is beautiful.

[Angel_Rowen]

I think it's nice. It makes you feel for the people at which the poem is for. There are a few spelling mistakes, but I think it makes it all the more original! heart So good luck and I give you a 5.
(Rate back? *~Maybe? Please?~*)

[Patt Smear]

cliche.
and there's a few spelling mistakes.