path of the reaper

• Artist: muayjaythai
• Description: on a sudden muze
  
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: path reaper dark hell

oh, pitch black night
mother of the darkest knight
hear me prayer
and become even darker
may i receive no light
nor the power to fight
to destroy the reaper
who kidnapped my brother?

may you lend me your powerful darkness
and allow me on this quest
to seek my brother in the depths of hell
i shall return with him safe and harmless

Comments

[Klaora]

D=> Punctuation and capitalization, please? Otherwise, I find this a pretty interesting subject and poem. An edit is in order, but the time to do it will be worth it, in my opinion. It would be good to salvage it. :3

[jdude1012]

Awsome!!!!!!!!!!

[muayjaythai]

i put the z on purpose

[Belle-Manon]

That's muse, darling.