Storm of Emotion

• Artist: phoenix of the twilight
• Description: one of my first poems... it can describe my life a lot of the time. Let me know what you think.
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: storm emotion

I dont know what is wrong with me
Its always something I cant see
Things never seem to be all right
No matter if its day or night

I dont know what it is I lack
But right now my world is pure black
I need something to light the way
Or an arm on which to lay

This blade of mine is stained with red
But I know not whose blood I shed
My enemies I do not see
Or maybe Im my enemy?

Will this confusion ever cease
Will I soon find my inner peace?
I do not know where I can go
So for now my head hangs low

I hope I can soon see your face
With hope your smile can bright this place
To pierce through inner toil and strife
And restore the light in my life

Comments

[britters19135]

this is really good :]

[Euphraini]

this poem.. rhymes a lot.... xD i like it... the rhythm's good biggrin oh.. and you forgot to put an apostrophe in Im, 3rd stanza last line ^-^

[bubba052798]

you are a great poet