Lets not stray to far.

• Artist: Misunae
• Description: About a girl who never thought shed fall for something soo stupid, cause she thought she could help this guy out of his bad habits.
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: lets stray

Dancing on top of the world
But yet so pure so clean
all so deceiving in every way
You run and dance and glance
and wonder how such confused
faces know so much.

Hoping and trusting under the surface
Yet so careless, so weak
All so chancing, just a bit more, everyday
questioning and not much learned
from the confused face that looks
so hurt.

You seek farther and farther trying to get an answer
There you are so low
that you don't even know

You sit in dark nights
freezing and believing
You're so deceiving.

When you learn to live
You're out of range
Come back and stay
Please lets not stray

To a place
that we in which do not
belong.

Comments

[Ubiquitous Androgyny]

yea bit of grammer mistakes but me still likey xP

[And_He_Said_Booyahi]

Nice poem Ash 5/5

[iiAidan]

very good
4/5

[1-up2]

awesome poem Ash. : D 5/5 <3

[The Love Mutt]

To vs. Too
Your vs. You're

[xx-Nex-Serenus-Decorus-xx]

Bittersweet with some grammatical errors, but I liked it. ^_^.