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• Artist: steph_20_36
• Description: i wrote this poem after my grandmother died because everybody thought i was fine but inside i was crying all the time.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: hidden

people think im fine
but that's only because
they cant see whats on the inside

things are not wat they
seem at first glance
for if you look deeper
into everyones lives
there is something hidden

what you see on the outside
insnt even half of whats on the inside

Comments

[meth120]

i really like it, keep on writing. 5/5

[miszunderrsztood_azn]

Yay first comment! Wow....that still touches my heart every time i read it. sooo amazing. you rawk!! keep it up! 100000/5!! :]