-
My First
My first crush
My first boyfriend
My first love
My first date
My first kiss
My first desire
My first passion
My first time
My first fight
My first drink
My first smoke
My first blade
My first cut
My first sorrow
My first guilt
My first lonliness
My last time
To say goodbye
To all the people I've loved
Whoever said love brings happiness
My first happiness
Was broken by your words
"I love you"
Such a lie...
- by vampire_fetish15 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: My First
- Artist: vampire_fetish15
-
Description:
Well, I just felt like I had to write this, 'cause love brings pain to others... and to yourself... it can be good and bad. Love.... is like.... poison. T_T
ENJOY!! =D - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: first
- Report Post
- Reference Image:
-
Comments (4 Comments)
- XoFire_BabeOx - 02/16/2009
- well ya see im wicked hard to please when it cums to writing and i say that was pretty good
- Report As Spam
- Fantastic Nightmares - 01/12/2009
- You are so right! in that last part...amazing!
- Report As Spam
- x Aihpos x - 12/20/2008
-
I LOVE the last part.
"Whoever said love brings happiness?
My first happiness was broken by your words: "I love you"
Such a lie. "
Oh my gosh Kare, I love it love it love it. It's so true. Love brings more sorrow than happiness. - Report As Spam
- Master crazychic - 12/14/2008
- wow thats deep
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
