Ache

• Artist: Ame Namikaze Kun
• Description: A poem that describes how I really feel inside. You are about to see a glimpse of what I hide from other people, my emotions.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: ache

This ache in my chest,
oh how it is a pest.
It ails me,
can't you see.

My heart,
I wish to tear apart.
Locked, locked it is,
so no one can claim it as his.

When I see red,
it drains my dread.
One is all it takes,
eyes, flowing over like lakes.

Relief, sweet relief,
from sadness, from grief.
This is where I lay,
but the ache may come another day.

Until then, I am filled with light,
it feels so right.
That is all I can lend,
for now here is the end.

Comments

[Ame Namikaze Kun]

thx. i have other poems but just don't want to put them on rite know. im lazy.

[Xiang-jiao]

The rhyming in this poem is poor. Try not to worry so much about rhyming, and just express how you feel [Or have a thesaurus with you while writing]. Don't stop writing though, if you enjoy it.

[atsyrk]

biggrin 5/5 read mine

[Obstruction]

smile