Tree on the Hill

• Artist: Zabethlyburn
• Description: I just felt like writing and this just popped out.
  Please, criticism is welcomed! ^_^
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: tree hill

You stand there all alone on that hill.
There you stand so very still.

Years are gone yet you are still there.
Immortal on that hill in the crisp mountain air.

Your arms reached towards the sky.
Thunder cracks and you say good-bye.

Comments

[Mfrieler324]

I liked it. Short, but it works...

Kind of gives me a sad vibe...:S

4/5!

[Eric_the_shyfox]

good job man smile 4/5