I wait my days...

• Artist: ms_punk_queen
• Description: This is for every heart out there who is stil searching for thier true love. Just remember that one day you will find your love even if you think its only in your dreams.
• Date: 12/15/2008
• Tags: wait days romeo

I wait my days,
away in my castle,
its my eternal prison
as I await my Romeo's arrival.

I wait my days,
alone by myself
with only my owls
as my comfort.

I wait my days
wondering them away
wishing my Romeo would show
but they are only dreams.

I wait my days
until he shows
alone by myself
waiting for his arrival

I wait my days
standing on my balcony
waiting for him to come
I see him there walking

I wait my days
as I see him everyday
walking the path to my castle
back and forth he walks.

I wait my days
until the day
the man who is my Romeo
leaves my castle.

I wait my days
as I scream out my window
but he cannot hear me
for I'm not in a castle

I wait my days
as I come out of my dream
thinking about when
when my Romeo will show

I wait my days
as I realize that
one day I cant wait for him
I live my life day by day

I wait my days
I still wait for him
for him to show

I wait my days
even though he will not show
I still wait for him
I know that he will be there
be there in my dreams.

I wait my days
as I fall back asleep
knowing that my Romeo awaits
awaits for my arrival.

Comments

[angel_wolfy228]

If you know poetry you should know that repeatition is a key concept in poetry and I thought she did an amazing job! 5/5

[Fairy Luna Nocturna]

Nicely written but I do have to agree with Izzy of the Insane's comment about "wait my days" line being used a bit too much.

[Izzy of the Insane]

The "wait my days" line was just used waaaay too much. I don't mind a few repeats when their spaced out decently, but this doesn't work for me.

[Stinkeryoshy]

There wasn't any rythm. Like wen you use common syllables. It sounds a little off but the idea and scene portrayed is ver good