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Im Finally
Broken
Ive Fallen
Appart.
You Told Me
You Loved
Me, That
Youd
Always Be Here
So Where
Are You
Now?
- Title: Broken.......
- Artist: 1_H4X0R_1
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Description:
For All Those Girls And Guys Who Have Been Cheated On This Poem Is For You
If You Have Been Cheated Comment Me And Rate This Poem Also Add Me As A Friend Please
Sincerely Your Friend:
DanielAKASpikes"HandXMeXTheXRazor - Date: 12/18/2008
- Tags: broken depressive love brokeanheart
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Comments (6 Comments)
- kamahaazi - 06/08/2009
- the idea is good, but you seem to attatched to it. you need to let the people reading it actually connect it to their life. other than that, good.
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- Overworkedandunderpaid - 01/18/2009
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I'd have to agree with Haku is cheesy, stop capitilizing. Your grammar needs serious attention too. This poem doesn't really have any reference to the title or summary, it needs to be more descriptive. As for the actual idea, it's unoriginal and has been done before. 1/5.
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- Xlonely_tear_dropX - 01/18/2009
- its good but yea i haven't been cheated on but its still good =]
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- Maxx Renfew - 01/14/2009
- That is pretty good. its the truth, to say the least. wink
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- Maxx Renfew - 01/14/2009
- That's pretty good. smile
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- haku is cheesy - 12/29/2008
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1'd.
DO NOT CAPITALIZE EVERY WORD OMG - Report As Spam
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