War

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description: Funny. sad. blahblah
• Date: 12/19/2008
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War

Blistering heat, the anger doth resonate with innumerable spirits locked in climactic battle
Raging feat, Clasped steel knocking heartless fury and chained rattle

Blood lust thrives, mind mad and crippled soul lead countless in sickening beauty
Pestilence strives, The death god wakes to fulfill his oath sworn duty.

Ageless consortium, Armies rise and quickly fall to to an everlasting
dance of hell's ire.
Endless pandemonium, Chaos reigns supreme for all eternity to distort the land with dark fire.

Comments

[SirynECrow]

I suppose it's decent enough. Personally I don't care for it, but I can feel the emotion there.

[whitejade13]

Wow. I love how you put the words together. Just fascinating. 5/5

[Sorceress_Wakaru]

Woah! You really made the setting all red with gloom and darkness. You have captured some of the details pertaining to war but you haven't putted in the gruesome part of it. You have placed in your poetry the words of fancy covering the reality of it like revenge and that kind of sort making everyone think of war as an art and not as a sin.

[iiReina]

this is a really descriptive way to describe war! xD

[Bleuraven123]

Makes the word "war" sound like a great thing, lol!!
I'm not just supporting coz your my friend....
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