What About Me?~

• Artist: gothicbabybear109-Rp
• Description: just spurof the moment crap, that I felt like pouring out of my heart into a form of text, forgive me if it's crappy! <3
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: about

If beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
Why, do I see you, and you hold her?
You say you love me.
I thought it true.
I said that I love you!
How can you do this to me?
We where meant to be!
Your holding her hand, kissing her lips, telling her you love the way she looks.
I know love doesn't just exist in book's.
Tell me you don't love her!
Tell me your just a friend!
I don't want to believe what I've found.
Maybe I should leave, make no sound.
Pretend I haven't noticed, this heartbreaking scene.
Make you really love me.
Maybe I haven't noticed.
You never wanted love, just a leaning post.
You never wanted love, just a freebee.
Everything from me, my life, my love, my heart.
I'm taking it back, and that's how I'll start.
Tonight, I will make you leave.
Make you leave, to benefit me.
I will be free.

Comments

[Tanya Reikasu]

Whats crappy? not this but holeh crow girlie! Its even better than mine {Mind you mines full of grammar mistakes and spelling xD}

5+ stars!!

[xx_love_4never_xx]

i love it! it happened 2 me 2 except i came back 2 him so im not free.....

[Grim Intentions]

Once again, amazing work!! It is very good. I loved the end! 5/5

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

It is kind of crappy. Love is a topic so overdone it makes me weep.

[katmaniac]

the only thing crappy about that poem is the momment it was written in
the poem rocks
the momment that inspired you must have been really bad crying

[Master Hanzo Shadow]

that must have been hard to go though