shade

• Artist: h_rok1
• Description: it is about love and shade if it shall fade or rise. i hope u like it.To:ddreams2much sorry for any spelling mistakes. Hope u like it.
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: shade

Verse 1: In the night a shade rises,
In the day the shade falls,
In my life theres no shade,
My light is to powerful for this shade.


Chorus:If i shall vanish into the shade,
Will you love me enough to come into the shade,
We will get through this together,
And we will be together forever.



Verse 2:The shade shall fade,
It will fade when we're together,
I hope its forever,
Now that were together the shade has faded into the light.

Comments

[Sunafire]

Hmm, it's okay but I feel like you repeat the word 'Shade' too much.
It's not really a bad thing, it's just a personal sort of criticism.
You could add a bit of structure, as well.
Other than those small things, it's pretty good! Very deep.