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Please no criticism tonight
I know my room’s a mess
Please no criticism tonight
I know my head’s not right
And I’m not all that polite
But please no criticism tonight
I may not be that bright
Since my grades are quite a sight
But please no criticism tonight
My life may be a wreck
My friends have jumped off deck
Please no criticism tonight
I may not be the girl of your dreams
Or as sweet as I may seem
But please no criticism tonight
Tonight I want peace
Tonight I want quiet
I want happiness and rest
Tonight may be my first
Tonight may be my last
A chance I will take
It might be my first, it may be my last
But please,
No criticism tonight.
- by 2 much mcdonalds |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Suicide Note
- Artist: 2 much mcdonalds
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Description:
I'm not trying to commit suicide, I just put myself in the shoes of a suicidal person.
Hope you enjoy! - Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: suicide note
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Comments (4 Comments)
- violet kushina - 08/14/2012
- nice note..
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- 2 much mcdonalds - 12/22/2008
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its okay,
thanks for noticing. - Report As Spam
- michellie-87 - 12/21/2008
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this is cool!
I didn't realize it was a suicide note untill I looked at the title after reading it.
I know it's ironic, because it says no criticism, but it should be "quite a sight". 5/5 because I like it smile - Report As Spam
- matthias_uber - 12/21/2008
- im not a big fan of how many times you said no critisism tonight but liked the rest 4/5
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