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This mask I wear,
she serves me well,
she hides my pain,
so they can't tell.
They see her smile,
never my tears,
she shows no sorrow,
she fights all my fears.
They believe she is me,
if only they knew,
that she is my mask,
my saviour too.
My scars she hides,
behind laughter and lies,
she say's she is fine,
but slowly she dies.
S Snyder
- by Twilight-Luver08 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: The Mask
- Artist: Twilight-Luver08
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- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: mask
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sesskogaru - 08/12/2009
- awesome. I know how it feels to wear a mask. been wearing one all my life and this is a great poem. Took the words right out of my mouth. I like it lots. keep up the great work. wink
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- Felidae89 - 06/17/2009
- cool smile
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- xXsecret_artistXx - 02/10/2009
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your poem is fantastic, i did a similar one but mine had more similes razz
ps- and not as good either - Report As Spam
- xX_Zara_Xx - 02/02/2009
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WOW,
we did an almost similiar one
cept yours is better ^^
mine's "wearing the smiling mask" - Report As Spam
- Phinagin2000 - 01/16/2009
- very good, but kind of sad sad
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- Moonaca - 12/22/2008
- 5/5, so cute!
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- ManEastwood - 12/22/2008
- soo...nice.i never heard before!
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