~The one and only love~

• Artist: whoa-there-sailor
• Description: I was thinking about my bf in real life and only had a few minutes to write a poem before i got off my computer. It is not in my point of view. It would be the point of view of someone watching who knows what i am feeling.
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: only love

She thought that he was just the boy over there
But then she met him and started to care
She thought he was just a good friend
Until all her choices came to an end
She knew she was falling for him from the start
He is now and forever stuck in her heart.

Comments

[Summer_Love0015]

Your right, keeping the reader wondering is the best part, although this isn't that type of poem though!
Still 5/5
Keep up the good work Amber! wink

[kendra_sun]

I think even IF we didn't know who the SHE was it would be great. The fact that the reader is wondering about your poem would greaten its greatness. Lol. I think it's a good poem. Short and to the point.

[Summer_Love0015]

Aw! Very nice...
But Who is SHE??...
Thats sumting the reader is gona wonder about so... 4/5
Then again I read ur description too so now I now! 5/5