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Your warmth is so lush
Calm down theres no rush
Our finger tips touching
Will the blue Jays sing?
I look into your eyes
Think of failed trys.
Holding me in your arms
Running across tons of farms
Making a small wish.
Turn to me with a swish.
Maybe it has come true.
You thought it too.
- by Unfound Dreams |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Make a wish.
- Artist: Unfound Dreams
- Description: I don't know................................................
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: make wish
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Acid Frenzy - 12/24/2008
- Not bad, but could use some work. Spellcheck it and fix the rhymes so they don't sound so third-grade.
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- Unfound Dreams - 12/23/2008
- You think my works amazing?. I have never gotten that before. Most of the time I get 'Good Job' And 'Loved it' but never amazing. that is the best comment I have ever received.wow. I am litterally speechless.
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- Devilish Reminder - 12/23/2008
- Very nice XD The tons of farms lines was a bit random, but I think I get the point.Very nice. I like the whole scheme of the poem, I can really connect with it. Ali, did you know that all of your writing is amazing?
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