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Whisper, whisper, in my ear.
So full of love, so full of fear.
Whisper, whisper,
what did you say?
a muffled sound that fades away.
Whisper, whisper,
come back to me.
Lock the door, throw out the key.
Whisper, whisper, never leave.
Take your time, forget to breathe.
Whisper, whisper,
subtle and sweet.
Your kind words, they can't be beat.
For I am happy,
my heart's content,
whisper, whisper, never repent.
- Title: Whisper, Whisper
- Artist: NostaIgia
- Description: I just wrote it out of boredom. xP I really like it, though, and I hope you guys do too. <3
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: whisper rhyme
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Comments (5 Comments)
- White Lights Reprisal - 12/29/2009
- Great rhythm. Love it. 5/5!
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- -xxXMan BoyXxx- - 02/27/2009
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Love it it is very good!
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- NostaIgia - 12/23/2008
- Yes, I understood! Thank you! <3
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- ErikGilpher - 12/23/2008
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You're very good at these poems Gureisu-chan. Korekaramo ganbatte kudasai!
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- angelcutie92 - 12/23/2008
- i like it! biggrin
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