Breaking the Unfixable.

• Artist: This Accident
• Description: Sometimes you need to face things to heal, before it spirals out of control.
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: breaking unfixable healing

Trying to hold it in,
The ways that I feel.
Hostile, foolish, broken.

Starting to crack under pressure,
From holding it all in,
Cracked, unfixable, broken.

Feeling pushed aside,
And wondering where it started,
Anguish, lies, breaking.

Lying to myself,
To push it all aside,
You're fine, it will work out for the better, you're not broken.

The truth starts to pour out,
Causing deadly breakdowns,
Sobbing, internal dying, breaking.

Starting to feel better,
Feeling senses that are new,
Relief, healing, fixed.

Comments

[iwillbeatharvestmoon64]

i liked this poem a lot i feel like i have experienced this 5/5

[Mecca Against Reality]

Ignore 'Shadows Nexus'. Honestly they shouldn't talk with punctuation issues like that. If you don't like what people write, DON'T read it! If you feel the need to say something, give constructive criticism, not the garbage below, which you pose as a sentence.

Either way, I liked the poem, it shows a great POV, and many people can relate to it. 5/5!

[SilentxSecrets]

To the person below me:
if u dont have anything nice to say,
dont say anything at all!!!!!!!!

[Shadows Nexus]

why is every fricken peom on here emo it make no sense you wanabes

[xHAMR]

I have to say, this poem impacts those of us who understand it and have experienced it.
Very good; five out of five.

[Sugarchild12]

that is sort of hard to understand , but i still think its cool