how i lived

• Artist: lemonloodles2
• Description: well...i wrote this a while ago on a website, but i lost it all. i could only remember a little bit of the beginning ( and i edited most of it) but i just wrote on from the "eyes are alive" part. This story is about how i felt when i was really young, (im still young now, mind you) so this is how i saved myself from emoness. :) i hope you like it! this is my first time in a writing compitition.
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: lived teardeath

i know that love is what some seek,

like the beauty of sun rising to peek,

banners of yellow and rainbows of red,

your eyes are alive but your heart is dead,

we seek the one to make it thrive,

so our souls will be alive,

some may live and some may die,

my heart will break with a final sigh,

living through thoughs desprate years,

when i was drowned by my own tears,

my pain holds me as i sink,

caught in despare made me think,

how bad could my life possibly be?

others have it worse than me.

in my mind, my light would rise,

returning life to hollow eyes,

the tears of child hood, tears of pain,

cleansed me like an acid rain,

on order to remember, we must forget,

to carry on, we have to quit,

for differences are but the same,

carrying meanining but has no name.

gradually, we all will learn,

maybe alltogether or slowly in turn.

so things like this come to an end.

you know my tale, let yours begin

Comments

[lemonloodles2]

thank you guys! i do make alot of errors, and it is actually a poem. you guys are awsome possum! thanks so much!

[princess thamy]

uuGGhhh,,,Its So sweet,,hahaha,,


i caN feeL thE "FEEl" of thaT soNg...what,,is thaT a sOnG,,PoeM,,or what??

[DeleteThisInactiveAccount]

I liked it. At first, I wasn't expecting to, judging by spelling errors and the fact that it seemed to be like every other teen love poem. But... it's not. I really enjoyed it. Parts of it were a little shaky, but overall it was vary good.

[stargirl10193]

wow...first time really? this is absolutley beautiful. great job.