As I see her

• Artist: Hex_Zia
• Description: It's a simple poem as I thought in my head
  Then I wrote it down sometime later
• Date: 12/26/2008
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To look at her
once
twice

And to smile at her
once
maybe twice

And as she makes her way
one step
two step
three step

And I think of her
again
and again
and again

What I say to her
one word
two word
three word

But what I want to say to her
Three words
Three little words
Three damned little word

Comments

[icelestial_nightmare]

its pretty good... you have just a little too much repetition.

[Xx-dark hybrid-xX]

i love it its really good 100 percent

[whitejade13]

Oh I like it! I like it a lot! 5/5 smile