Useless Human

• Artist: Touketsu-x-Tsuki
• Description: About a girl who commits suicide. I'm not that good with poems but i tried my best.
  Suicide is such a dark topic. For the people out there who want to commit suicide please don't give up. I know that this girl gave up, but i just wrote this out of the top of my head.
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: useless human

I can’t
I just can’t anymore

I’ve tried my best in this world
But maybe my best wasn’t good enough…
Am I good enough?

I’m hiding in this shadow of protection
Too bad the protection was never here
Leaving me in a shadow of lies and deceit

I can’t take it anymore
I’m alone
And I’m sure no one would miss me

I’m sure no one would stop me
As I look down to the many cars and people walking by
I can’t help but think “They wouldn’t miss me”

I gaze down again. The people look like ants. I laugh for the last time
Tears stream down my face

Maybe, just maybe I’m doing the right thing.
The world has no need for a useless human
And that’s exactly what I am.
Useless.

I closed my eyes as I got ready to jump.
No one would miss me
No one would care

The last thing I felt was the heavenly breeze
I felt like I was flying
Above everything
Away from everyone

Until the darkness took over…

I felt no remorse for my actions
After all…the world deserved a better human

Comments

[NostalgiaDrunk]

Ha way better than mine check it out 120/5

[Darkest_Moon67]

Its awesome thats how...... sometimes peop feel that!
=D

[yokume210]

Great! U can write!

[XxNemuri_AkiraxX]

oh wow. that's sad. I considered suicide at one point. but yeah, that's really good.

[rampagejoe]

lovely ........truly beutiful you should read some of mine its all right 5/5

[atsyrk]

thats really good. once i thought about suicide and felt that way. but im here, cuz i found someone, 1 person who needed me. and ur wrong, u r good at writing. look at mine, mine suck. 5/5

[Chad the BM]

that's a very good message . i wish too that people that think of committing suicide wouldn't give up .