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Being next to you makes my heart jump...
Then it always leads to goose bumps...
Making you laugh makes me feel good...
Just like i know it should...
Seeing a beautiful girl like you...
Gots me thinkin how lucky i met you...
You always make me smile...
Whenever i come walkin about 10 miles...
You know ill do anything for you...
Just as long it doesnt kill me...
Even though were apart, you will always be my gurl...
No one can break us apart, not even the whole world...
There is one thing you should know...
I will always love you even when your gone...
- by xIVooDooIx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/28/2008 |
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- Title: My Love Poem
- Artist: xIVooDooIx
- Description: this has actually happened to meh 2 times....this is a 2nd poem i have writtin...post a comment plz
- Date: 12/28/2008
- Tags: love poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mznight - 02/23/2010
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N!ce
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- IHannah255 - 08/24/2009
- awesome
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- Nurse Garland - 07/24/2009
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it is pretty rough, it stops and goes, the rythm is choppy.
i like how you entered it with spoken speach, ei. gots me thinkin. - Report As Spam
- xXAlternate RealityXx - 07/18/2009
- It was pretty good, though I still like your other one better. You might want to tweak the rhymes, maybe you should stick to unrhyming poetry. because the other one was amazing.
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- Valoralin - 07/18/2009
- wow so cute ^_^ i love it
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- blackdragons24 - 01/16/2009
- Hey that is a really good poem too like how you wrote it
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- Asharm - 01/15/2009
- wow that was killer (as in awsome dude) that was SWEEEEEEET!!!!!!!!!
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