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A trial of fire lies burning hot,
leaping through the rings of what I thought,
mastering the tests set up by my mind,
Amazing new traits, each day I find,
In you, the angel of my dreams,
my heart is lost amidst your seas,
more than I was ever looking for,
overwhelmed, I need not ask for more,
In my soul, you are always there,
for your love, I deeply care,
A star lifted up inside the sky,
You spread my wings so I can fly.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: An Old Love Poem
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Something I hate.
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: love poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Amsy Nukes_x - 08/24/2009
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I like it It's very nice and Can u all tell me what u think of this?
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- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- uumm...this is actually the first poem that's not...uumm....dark? xDD but i love it~ seriously. i think this is something you should be proud of!! don't hate it! D;
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/29/2008
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aah... hahahah~
at least this time, it isn't that depressing, hahah...
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