It can't be true

• Artist: Cherry_Snuffles 6661
• Description: This poem is about my grandpa, When he died all i thought was 'It can't be true' So this poem is dedicated to him.
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: cant true

When I heard that you were gone.
It couldn't be true.
I lay there and cryied, I loved you so much.
It couldn't be true.

I knew the day would come, but not so soon.
It couldn't be true.
My Parents tried to comfort me but,
It couldn't be true.

I knew you were gone, never coming back but.
It couldn't be true.
My life seems like it's back to normal.
It can't be true.

I still talk to my friends, but behind that mask I'm hurt.
It can't be true.
If I'm in a bad mood, they ask why, I say nothing.
It's not true.

I love you.
I want you back.
You can't be gone.
I still love you.

It can't be true.

Comments

[Lotus136]

I love this poem.you already know who died in my family.... cry waaaahhhhhhhhhhh!sorry.i cried....i'll just get outa here...P.S.you'll get through it.mostly.or at least a little.or a,or, question

[iStab Crayons]

My grandpa just recently pasted away so I know how you feel....Its really good

[white horse93]

yeah, I agree with Mother of shadow (wink wink) when people in your family die, you can't believe it. and the pain doesn't really FADE, it just hides for a little while. just sit on your couch with Harry (your rabbit, not Potter) and gorge yourself on ice cream. that's what I'd do. you deserve it.

[PinkFire07]

In some of the stanzas, "it can't be true" didnt fit in quite well. For example in stanza #3, if you were getting your life back together, why were you still saying to yourself: It cant be true.
But i see where you're coming from.
Good job smile

[Metal_Majesty]

wow that was just heart wrenching its a good poem wonderful

[Hawkbri]

Wow.
o.o
powerful, meaningful, and typed properly. 5/5