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My soul bleeds like rose petals
my mind drops thoughts like rain drops
her image to me that of precious metals
if her love leaves me...my heart beat please stops
a few kind words and id be her lover
if i wasnt already her slave
picking leaves off the four time clover
oft making pacts...im the gods to save
i often wonder if my heart is true
if my feelings wander from her to you
love is something for you to hold
if i was to be so bold
as to finaly...after all this time...tell you my feelings...to become more than a slave to them.
- by Raven Whisperwind |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: A Slave to the Unstoppable
- Artist: Raven Whisperwind
- Description: Ok no this is not a twilight reference...im tired of people making that connection this is about a personal experience...before someone tells me this doesnt make sense just think for a moment please?
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: poem love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Cendrillon Lizzie - 07/06/2010
- I just want to tell you that this didn't remind me of twilight at all, honestly. And I liked it!
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- Raven Whisperwind - 02/03/2009
- id like to note ive never seen twilight and generaly tired of that movie mainly because of obsessed people...im not kidding please keep that connection away from my poem
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- bloodrice - 12/30/2008
- reminds me of vampires wink
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