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how do you keep me here
wanting more
dreaming sweet dreams
never thought it be
that when i close my eyes
i see you
how your eyes look at me
searching for a glimpse of hope
hope that i’ll confess my feelings
but feeling choked up on my words
feeling utterly paralyzd
stupidly
and yet i see you
wishing i can say the words within
wishing i can touch you in that certain way
the way that will let you know
i do love you too
and yet
stupidly
akwardly
paralyzd by you
i wish i knew
this spell you used to captivate me
and in it
live for eternity
- by Rodrik_the_dark_knight |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: ugh in love
- Artist: Rodrik_the_dark_knight
- Description: ok so yea I wrote this awhile back and I just found it and had to type it in
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- liilyann - 03/09/2009
- love it
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- Miss Salsa Sam - 01/01/2009
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very good poem. Its the kind of poem you know was written with passion and emotion. Keep writing! One thing that I would like to see change is how it reads or how good it flows from line to line but still awsome!
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- Bleuraven123 - 01/01/2009
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er, cool.. biggrin
This--you fell in love. The other one--you were hurt... Uh...
Well, this is still impressive. 3nodding - Report As Spam