Feathers of Darkness

• Artist: Celestial Snow Angel
• Description: My avatar arena entry after the December 2008 Monthly Collectibles. Enjoy ^.^
• Date: 12/31/2008
• Tags: feathers darkness

She walks into the star-filled sky
Her eyelashes glimmer as she flutters her eyes
She is as light as a feather, as cool as the snow
The voice of an angel, a cloak of the night
One may not know that there small voice
is right.
Her cyrstallic eyes may leave you aglow
But inside her hunger is hard not to show
With pain she holds a small suffered friend
The feathers a veil to the agony she's in
So do not be fooled by her angelic appearance
For inside she's tougher then anyone's been.

Comments

[My Optional Angel]

There is just a small typo on line 9. I might be wrong but I think you mean she instead of he. Apart from that it's a interesting poem. A lot of the imagery in this poem makes think about some of the items here on Gaia, lol. Good work!

[visualkei_queen 101]

I like it! ITS AWESOME!!