Dreaming of you

• Artist: WaFfLeS1232
• Description: These next few of my poems are mainly about my boyfriend and some of how I feel. This is about a dream I had a few nights ago and I decided to write a poem about it...I think its good....so please Comment and give me your opinion.
• Date: 01/05/2009
• Tags: dreaming

Close those eyes I dream about and
Dream of me,
Dream of the girl who is yours
Give her a kiss and dream.

Dream of her face
Dream of her love
Dream of that girl
Who made you love.

She'll kiss your beautiful lips
and make you hers
She'll take you away
She'll tell you with a soft laugh

'I Love You more
then most had loved you.'

Comments

[iluvpolkadots]

Hmmm...Its..okay. It could use a lot of work...on what..Im not quite sure.. Good luck..
Sorry if Im being more than less than unhelpful..