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The pain is suffocating me, I cant breathe,
I gasp for air and reach for you,
My arms flail searching for you,
I cant find you,
Your not there,
You never were,
You left me,
You hurt me,
You left me to die,
You left me in the dark,
When I needed you most,
When I needed you to be their,
When I need your love,
I needed you,
You didn’t need me,
You didn’t want me,
You never loved me,
You never cared for me,
You used me,
You abused me,
You didn’t care for me,
You lied,
I can’t live without you,
I can’t be without you,
I can’t breathe without you,
I can’t breath….
- by L e n n o n xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/05/2009 |
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- Title: I can't breathe!
- Artist: L e n n o n xx
- Description: I wrote this in a mere 3 minutes. Its free verse and i guess its about someone who's lover....well never really loved them but that person feels they cant live without that person.
- Date: 01/05/2009
- Tags: cant breathe
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Comments (4 Comments)
- L e n n o n xx - 01/28/2009
- idk i just wrote it along time ago for no reason. :/
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- murrrdiffff - 01/10/2009
- omgsh i love it!
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- xXLaura_LovelyXx - 01/05/2009
- omg, what happend...
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- sergeantstephanotis - 01/05/2009
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It's focused on one aspect of a complex feeling and is to the point. For a three minute poem, it's pretty good.
PS. There's a big difference between "their" and "there." - Report As Spam
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