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Who am i but a boy lost and confused.
Forever in my taciturnity.
I always question till my brain is bruised.
Yet i am always searching for serenity.
Everyday i live with these chains on my soul.
Will i drink the nectar of freedom?
Or will i fall into darkness just like coal?
These thoughts are born from irrelevent boredom.
People say i need to be optimistic.
Be positive, hold up your head to the sky.
However i am rather pessimistic.
Who wouldn't be with the countless people who die.
Perhaps i tend to over-analyze.
Perhaps i hit the head on the nail.
- Title: My Hollow Insides
- Artist: SpiralCid
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Description:
this was a poem i had to write for english class during my senior year
of high school. it was supposed to be in iambic pentameter (<<<spelling?) but it didnt
work out that way. and yes at the time i had a fascination with the word taciturnity. - Date: 01/05/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Jellybean Julie - 03/16/2009
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nice
keep up the guud wurk - Report As Spam
- rape-bo - 01/08/2009
- thats very good, keep writing i like your style razz
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