Night

• Artist: X_Midnight_Wind_X
• Description: This is for my Young Authors Book (it's for my English grade sadly) and I could use some feed back please and good ratings also help my self-esteem XD
• Date: 01/11/2009
• Tags: night

I'm the raven in the sky
the fleeting shadow
the stars are my eyes
the moon my friend
where there is darkness
no one is safe.

Comments

[cosmic_grl_102]

I luv it personally!

[Adrenaline Monkey]

I love it ^.^

[X_Midnight_Wind_X]

or cut it out

[X_Midnight_Wind_X]

i was thinking of changing the ending to
"you are never safe from me
I am watching for you
No where you can go is safe from me"

[Princesses Allelujah]

cut little poem could have a better ending i don't think it goes very well with the rest or the poem it great though i may be miss understanding the poem or u just need to add more thats all

[Unborn Fetus Mafia]

Nice image to go with it, good job ^^