hmm...

• Artist: brianridesabike
• Description: this is something i wrote awhile back.
  you'll have to decipher this one for yourself.
  
  and yes,
  i do know it doesnt ryhme.
  its called rhythmetic poetry.
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: flower lighter burning whisper poison

so i sit and reminice.
ive got a lighter,
and im slowly burning,
my memories alive.
and there among the ashes.
grew a single bud,
so beautifull.
immediately wilted,
by the poison on my breath
as i whispered a silent
"goodbye"

Comments

[Deirdre Moon]

I like this poem a lot :] it reminds me of one of my friend's RP characters. I haven't heard from him in ages. I'll have to track him down to read this <3 Good job, it really has some deeper meanings to it.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

hmmmm this poem is actually making me think...to me it means trying to burn away the past so that the future can grow from the ashes. nice work ^^