Love is a Sword

• Artist: Xanopticon
• Description: Just a quick poem I thought of in like five minutes. It kinda has to do with my life, it kinda doesn't. You know what I mean? ;D
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: love sword

Love is a Sword.
My heart is pierced.
Love is beautiful,
Yet can be deadly.
It can be used to defend.
It can be used to attack.
It can be used to save.
It can be used to kill.
Drawn from the scabbard,
And thrust upon me.
Will I be subject to scratches?
Or shall blood be drawn harshly,
Finishing me quickly?
The wounds never heal.
Your heart never heals.

Comments

[firestarscool]

I like it. (:

[GrandmaStyle]

I think the ending could be more, like...final, you know?
It just kinda hangs there for me.
But i like it. Its very good.