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“when you look at me
What do you see?
A face, two eyes, rose lips smiling.
But can you look beyond my lashes,
And capture a sole
Half turned to ashes?
Can you see the beauty within
The person hiding beneath my skin.
Do you notice what my eyes conceal?
What are lies, what is real?
Do you understand the signals I send?
Will you love me until our lives end?”
You stare and squint,
And tilt your head,
Processing the words
That I have said,
Will anyone truly know what I mean
Or is that something I can only dream
But then you say what I’ll never forget
Words so contorted they perfectly fit.
“yes, I see your face,
So creamy white
With those eyes deep green,
And oh so bright.
But a second look
And I find
A mix of colors
Warmly combined.
Deeper down is your heart
Sweetly soft, with a hint of tart.
I can tell that it has suffered many a bruise
And has lost something that kills you to loose.
You try to hide beneath your shell
That does not fit at all well,
Then I see the mind inside
So brilliant it makes me cry,
I understand you
Like the moon does the sea
Pushing and pulling
So delicately,
I’ve never needed the signals
To tell me how you feel
I can easily find what is real,
And I’ll always love you
More than you’ll ever know,
You’re like a winter midnight
Of fresh fallen snow,
You’ll always be part of me
My love is not a heart,
It’s an endless sea”
With that,
Tears streamed down my face
His words held incredible grace
As if they bled
Straight from his heart
This wasn’t the end,
It was the start.
- Title: The Sideways Gaze
- Artist: onionio
- Description: So, I wrote this when I was in 6th grade. I really have no idea what I was thinking because this story was completely imaginary, and normally I don’t like these types of poems. The rhythm doesn’t work so well in certain parts, but I’d love some feedback.
- Date: 01/21/2009
- Tags: sideways gaze
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- raymond_blackjack - 01/24/2009
- nice poem!!i cant even write that long :rafl:
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